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Sparkles Experiments Epilogue - Trixie by NavitasErusSirus

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Darkness quickly drew over the hills of Ponyville, and night was soon upon the town. Having spent the entire day with all of her friends doing her best to make up for her mistakes, Twilight was absolutely exhausted. As she waved goodbye to Rainbow Dash at her home in the clouds, she slowly made her way back to her own, the Library.

Upon entering through the large red door, she carefully wiped her hooves on her welcome mat and brought a few of the lanterns around the room to life, breathing a comforting warm light into the whole house. Twilight quickly scanned the Library and cocked her head with an ear standing on end, listening for her assistant. There was nothing. She had not yet realised exactly what might have happened to Spike in the recordings, and simply thought that he must be out and would return later.

As she trotted up the stairs, half-attentively shuffling and picking up a few books that were laying on the ground, she turned back and looked into the base of her home, giving out a brief sigh. The sigh contained so many emotions of the day, anger, fear, excitement, relief. She was just glad that it was all over. The lanterns all whisked themselves out in quiet puffs as Twilight headed up to her bed, leapt into it, and instantly wrapped the sheets around herself. It’d been about a week since she’d slept in her bed, and by Celestia, the pleasure brought by the comfort was incredible. Being well and truly exhausted, Twilight almost instantly fell asleep, and the time began to fly by.

The bright moon was almost directly above the town in the midnight sky when a quiet tip-tapping could be heard scuttling around on the ground floor. Twilight didn’t hear it, as she was busy imitating a pig. Sleeping beauty was snoring furiously in a well-deserved deep sleep. The scuttling continued, getting closer and closer to the bed until stopping briefly, and then the sound of soft padding replaced it. Twilight’s ears twitched gently at this, and her snoring ceased as her brain began to subconsciously concentrate.

She slowly regained consciousness when a quiet squeak rang out through the library like a tolling bell in the dead silence. As she lazily pulled open her eyelids, her pupils dilated rapidly as a small, azure coloured mouse with a tooth-paste mane sat directly in front of her eyes.


With a wild shriek and the flailing of her legs, Twilight flew out of her bed and ended up on the floor entangled in her bed sheets. The azure mouse hurtled through the air, squeaking in fear, landing and scuttling away down the stairs, into her hidey hole under the orange wall-desk at the bottom.

Her heart pounding madly, Twilight took a breath and pulled the coverings away from her, accidentally tearing a large hole in the duvet as she pulled it across her horn.

“Gosh… dangit… ”

She laid the ripped sheet on her bed and sighed, sleepily turning around and making her way down the stairs.

“Oh Trixie you poor thing… I’m so sorry… how could I have forgotten about you… “

Twilight remembered exactly where Trixie had ran off to in the recording and, safely assuming she was right, headed over to her wall-desk and got down on her front legs.


She spoke softly into the darkness beneath the legs of the desk. There was no response.

“Please Trixie, I can change you back… please, I know you’re in there”

An odd moment of silence passed, then came a quiet squeak from under the desk, though no mouse emerged from beneath.

“Trixie, come on out, I won’t hurt you, I promise… ”

Twilight drowsily beseeched her, it was no use though. Trixie was far too frightened by what had happened to trust her. She gave a tired sigh and sat on her rump besides the desk, trying to rack her exhausted mind for an idea. What could she possibly say that could get Trixie out of her hiding place?

As soon as this thought travelled through Twi’s mind, brilliance struck her. She stood back up and slightly away from the desk. Her heart fluttered at the thought of what she was about to do, she’d never tried anything like it before. A small patch of the room glowed purple as her horn lit up, the aura brightened and washed down over Twilight’s own body before slowly fading, dipping the room back into darkness.

She stood still for a moment, carefully examining herself in excited expectation, but nothing was happening. The unicorn raised a brow and huffed gently, about to give up and try something else, when an unusual massaging sensation began to ripple across her ears. She gasped as they twitched frantically and began to grow larger, suddenly unfurling into large, gorgeous rounded circles.

Barely containing her excitement for succeeding at such a high level spell, she gaped in amazement as the world around her seemed to grow rapidly larger with each passing second. Her eyes crossed onto her snout as it too seemed to roll away from her with a small adorable little button appearing on the end of it. She was too busy staring at her hooves gently growing at the ends into small furry paws to notice that two large shiny buck teeth had grown out under her elongated snout.

In no time she was suddenly slightly smaller than the size of an apple. Her transformation was complete, except for one small detail. As she hastily checked herself over to observe all of the changes, she turned around on herself and noticed that her luscious tail was still in pony form. As if because she’d just realised this, it suddenly whisked from base to tip into a thin blue string with a rather pleasurable feeling.


She giggled, rapidly shivering from head to paw. Her voice was notably higher pitched, and she could understand herself as a mouse. She took this is a good sign, hoping that she’d be able to talk to Trixie.

The unicorn-turned-mouse galloped under the desk and, with her new more light sensitive eyes, easily discovered a small mouse hole where the floor and wall met. Upon entering it, she discovered a small block of cheese with a mouse hole-shaped carving in the top, and a few bits of the bottom nibbled away.

Whilst Twilight continued to examine the cheese, chuckling to herself at the thought of Trixie giving into her mouse instincts, a shadow crept up from behind, slightly covering the opening in the wall. The shadow suddenly left the ground, and after a gentle tumble and roll, Twilight found herself underneath the azure coloured mouse.


She cried with joy. Trixie’s reaction was evidently not mutual, as she bounced backwards, almost out of her skin, and fell flat on her hinds. She did not move from this position as she began to breathe rapidly, almost hyperventilating, whilst she stared with tremendous fear in her eyes at Twilight.

The lilac mouse understood that care was needed, so she slowly leaned up from her awkward laying position and sat herself on her own hinds, just in front of Trixie.

“I don’t want to hurt you, I want to change you back, and I want to show you that it wasn’t me who did this to you!”

Twilight pleaded. Trixie evidently understood what she was saying as her round ears twitched, but her expression of panic did not change. She had no reason to believe that Twilight’s presence in the mouse hole was for anything other than to exterminate the last of her experimental evidence.

She began to slowly crawl backwards on her rump away from the lilac mouse, mumbling and squeaking incoherently as she did. Twilight’s heart sank a little upon realising the kind of terror that Trixie must have endured, and with this, covertly held her in place with a subtle magical block as she carefully approached. She began to squeak louder and more fearfully the closer Twi got, expecting horrible things to happen, when to her surprise, Twilight wrapped her front legs around her and pulled her into a gentle embrace.

“I’m sorry Trixie… “

A few tears silently ran down Twilight’s cheeks as she tenderly necked Trixie. Something seemed to click at this point. She could tell that Twi actually meant what she was saying. As her thumping heart began to settle, Trixie withdrew from the gesture of comfort and gazed into the unicorn’s big lavender eyes. She meekly raised her paw and brushed it against Twi’s soft mousey cheeks, wiping the tears away, and let out a breath of relief as a smile began to creep across her face.

Without saying anything else, Trixie clumsily clambered to her paws and padded over to the hole in the wall, looking back briefly and beckoning with her head. Twilight smiled in relief and scampered after her, following her out in the middle of the now mind-bogglingly enormous ground floor of the library. She joined Trixie as she sat in the centre of the room, closed her eyes, and began to concentrate.

A tiny transparent purple glow began to twinkle around the two mice, barely illuminating the room. Trixie gawped around, eyes wide open in amazement as the aura began to swirl and twist into an enormous sparkling funnel around them. Twilight let out one last strain before gasping in relief, opening her eyes to see the truly wondrous display that she had conjured. Her attention was drawn when she glanced at Trixie and noticed that they were both beginning to grow. Before the transformation had barely started however, the funnel suddenly exhumed a thick foggy cloud of bright purple smoke, rapidly enveloping the two girls and obscuring them from one another.

Twilight began to panic a little and almost called out when she felt something clutching at her back. The cloud instantly evaporated into thin air and Twi jumped a little in surprise to find Trixie, back to her unicorn self, cuddling her intimately. She gently accepted the advance, resting her head on top of Trixie’s and slowly drawing her eyes closed.

“I should have known… “

Trixie muffled sadly into Twilight’s lush blue mane. The lilac pony giggled softly, lowering her snout to the azure unicorn’s ear, and whispered comfortingly.

“Was there ever any doubt?”


Phpfpt, even more wall.

P.S. - It doesn't have to be Twixie shipping. When friendly the ponies are clearly canonically affectionate of one another. Besides, there wasn't even any blushing in this one c.c .

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vekarvonkostu Featured By Owner Edited Jun 30, 2015  Student Artist
Best Series I have ever seen in my entire life, this is so Awesome, you are so Awesome my friend!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Rainbow-Gale Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
This was a really nice series. The mod of i-dream-of-twilight-sparkle linked me to it. Got to thank him for that. Couple of points I feel I need to address about this story. It should be "unicorn-turned mouse" and you said regarding Twilight "blue" tail and mane when they're purple. Other than that very nice story.
NavitasErusSirus Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw thank you! I'll have to thank him for doing that. Thanks for telling me about those, I'll edit them now. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :heart:
Rainbow-Gale Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014
No problem. It's what I do. :icongrammarnaziplz: :)
knightpony12 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014
make a fluttershy epilogueFluttershy - Free icon for ~Crystallyna 
sonicard Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Trixie: Son of a bitch. She stole my line.
speedysketch Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
soo cute!!
pokemonlegend999 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
OMG they so cute!!!
WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
A fine ending to a fine series of comics.
cool i like it.
irishbird208 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Trixie muffled sadly into Twilight’s lush blue mane."

Twilight's lush BLUE mane?!?!?!?
Clapping Pony Icon - Twilight SparkleTwilight Sparkle :zapapple: Trixie Clapping Pony Icon - Trixie 
...did Twilight mix their manes up like she did with Rainbow and Apple Jack?
HighRollerHydra Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Well, most of her mane is naturally blue...
irishbird208 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
tyruvelp Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
ur right about the typo (?)

and actually it is indigo 
ScarHoof Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
NightmareZV Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
D'awwww so cute that last part X3 good end for Trixie and Twilight, I was about to get feels when says that Trixie was squeaking when Twilight get near her and Twilight basically hugged her, so adorable :)
NavitasErusSirus Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you liked it, gotta have Twixie c//c x3.
Babyjoshy5 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What happened to Spike?!
You still need to clarify that part!
HighRollerHydra Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
She took care of it offscreen, I believe.
MasterBrattan Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Pinkie was absent too. Maybe hiding behind the 4th wall b/c she knew what was going on.
Babyjoshy5 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WingZero032 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013

StellaNora Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student
You just made my day XD
MyLittleOreo Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
I wish Spike had fried and eaten Trixie. That would have been a wonderful ending!
StellaNora Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Student
But i like twixie :(
MyLittleOreo Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
And I like Spike, and TWilight doesn't give a fucking shit about him here. She doesn't know where the fuck he is and she still doesn't flyinto a panic. Bitch just ASSUMES he's somewhere safe even though its after dark. he could've been teleported to Froggy bottom bog and is drowning right now.
StellaNora Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Student
MyLittleOreo Featured By Owner Edited Aug 29, 2014
Yes. Now we're just waiting for the rest of those stupid genie cunts to die in even more horrible ways, and for the princesses to qyickly replace them without giving a shit.
StellaNora Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Student
And doesn't even care if the loved ones cry :P
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TB2374 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Professional Artist
lol XD
suffering1990 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
VaguelyCreepy Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Great comic. Very interesting, with some decent feels at the end.

But what the clink happened to Spike?! :iconohshizplz:
Drflash55 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
Sluttyprince Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
You forgot Trixie's horn.
Goldeathorus Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
The fact that Trixie didn't just turn herself back tells me that he/she didn't.
Pumice-Footstone Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
so i've seen the Twixie genies story so far and Sparkle Experiments. Both are awesome. any others i should know about? :iconeagerplz:
dragonfufu Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Writer
Score of this story and animation :

OVER 9000!!!

Great animation & great story! i'm really enjoyed it! :D
NachoTheTrekkie Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Really a nice little story. I was wondering why Twi was just so OOC!
I'll go check your other stuff.
NavitasErusSirus Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! ^^
Pentrath Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
So wait what happened to spike?
Kiranta Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
He's still around.
TurtwigChampion Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The whole story was very cute and well done. :D
Dizzeh89 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Where is Trixie's Horn?
NavitasErusSirus Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Evil Clone Twi made it disappear when she turned Trixie into a mouse.
Wenapek Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
How I wish I had that talent to write. All those little details, the looks, the descriptions, the uses of traits as reference for the characters instead of always using their names, the rich words and everything else that was written, that technically didn't change a thing to what happened, but made it all the more interesting to read, there wasn't one word too many.
I wish I had half this talent, I've begun trying to write fanfics for about a week now, but so far I always find it plain, too straightforward and uninteresting, I couldn't describe anything to save my life. ><
Right this is a comment-box, not a place to tell your life, sorry about that. In short I think you're awesome and really should keep doing more.
ThatGuyOnTheInterweb Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconxalltheyplz::iconsays3plz: Make ALL the happy endings!
Plasmius94 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
why is trixie's horn missing?
rookeealding Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013 what happened to Spike?
Cotton-Candy-Pony Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Trixie has no horn. Anything but that, this is awesome! :3
Alex-Kitsune Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
I'm so very very sorry Navitas

You all know me, I'm an ass, a horrible monster who couldn't give anything a chance and immediately jumped to the wost possible conclusion, writing a completely unneccassary essay conveying an opinion, and I have no right to have an opinion.

I apologized to Navitas in private and while he/she said they accepted my apology I can't help but feel that Navitas hates me, like everyone here does.

I'm a monster, and jerk and probably the worst kind of "fan" this fandom can produce, the one who jumps to conclusions and doesn't even give things a chance.

I have no right to do My Little Pony Friendship is Magic related art or stories of any kind, especially not the deconstruction I had planned for a while after the way I reacted. I have no right at all.

I liked the epilogue conclusions, the wall-o-test got things resolved a bit more quickly than waiting for more comics would. I don't like AppleDash but I now know I have no right to have opinions so I won't say any more about that.

I will wait on your opinions and the suspend and delete my accounts here and on FiMFiction so I never do anything so horrible again.

I'm sorry....

I'm so so sorry....

I'm so very sorry....

I'm such an ass....

I'm such a monster....

I'm so very very sorry, everyone.....
I'm sorry....
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